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The contestants for The Story Telling and Drawing Contest.

To see information about Drawing & Story telling Contest, see "I declare a
Drawing & Story telling Contest!! Contestants needed! 1st prize: 100kp"
:D

1.) BlueJay29
The Turkey Hunter
By: Serena
One hour. That's all it would take. Bob, would shoot a turkey, kill it, and be home
for thanksgiving cooking time. He was the best known hunter, never to miss a shot.
Alex, the turkey was strutting around the forest, on his way home to his wife and
three kids. He had gotten food and was heading home. WHOOSH! A deer flew by Alex,
and Alex knew he had to strut much faster if he was going to make it away from the
hunter. He ran and ran, in a turkey-ish way trying to escape the hunter.
"I gotcha now you turkey!" shouted Bob ready to hunt his prey!
"Please! Spare me oh great hunter! I have a wife and three kids to feed! Spare me
SPARE ME!" cried the turkey as he ran
All Bob could hear was "GOBBLE GOBBLY GOBBLE!" and nothing else.
Bob was dumbstruck as he had a feeling he shouldn't shoot that turkey. But then
again, Bob need it for his wife's cooking, for he knew his wife would be  very angry
if he didn't shoot a turkey just because of a feeling. He located Alex, and snuck up
behind him. Ready to shoot he loaded his gun. Bob took position, "Ready, Aim, F-"


2.) Cerahureka
Nameless.
1 little report, that was all i needed, only 1 report , only 1 page, only 1 random
book about achient roman needed. But to do all that, *gulp* i had to go to the
LIBRARY! NO!! that was the place of extreme EVILUAR THINGS!!!! I've heard.. THINGS...
ive heard that you had to........................READ!!! it was a horrible thing to
do to a poor 12 year old... i begged not to go, but dear old pops was firm. The
library's entrance was a  huge roman style marble building. Huge pillars lined the
marbled celieng. black letters that wrote LIBRARY on the flat pannel. inside there
were many books, scratch that there were MILLIONS OF BOOKS!!! and none of them were
worth reading!! there was " RANDOM PIE EATING OLD DUDES" BY BOB SMITH. It was about a
guy who ate 48 types of pie. and " PIE IN THE OLDEN DAYS" By bobby smith. which was
about a man who baked 48 types of pie. and "NEFERTITI THE WOMAN WHO HATED PIE" BY
Billy bob Joe. which was about Nefertiti who threw 48 types of pie at her servents.
Finally, at the 1658th book i came upon a strange book.. it was worn and wethered,
like a 97 year old teddy bear. Black letters wrote " The Booke of The THEM... it
looked intresting... i opened the book. It kreeked with the years of unusedness.
Green and brown leaves swirled into the book. and so did i........

3.) ToxicDuck
All it took was one butterfly. One butterfly to distract me, and lead me
away from the group, not to mention get me lost.
 Now away from the rest of my classmates, the teacher, and the hike leader, I was
completely lost. The trail was nowhere to be seen, and I could hear nothing but the
soft chirp of the birds and the occasional crack of a twig I stepped on. 
"Helloooo! Anyone here?" I hollered. My only reply was the echo of my own voice.
This was great. Lost in the middle of a forest, with nightfall only an hour away. I
was pretty much doomed.

I wandered around for awhile, hoping I was headed in the general direction of the
path. Once I thought I heard someone, but it just turned out to be a bunny, nibbling
some grass on the lush forest floor. Stay positive, I told myself, Stay
positive, stay positive, stay- Just as I was going to finish my sentence, the
grey clouds that had been looming overhead broke loose. Heavy rain drops splattered
down to Earth, and onto my skin. What a great idea, wearing only a T shirt and
shorts. 

"You guys, where are you?" I was screaming now, panicking as the wind grew stronger,
the rain grew heavier, and the sky grew darker. I was honestly terrified. In the
movies the lost heroes always suddenly found a compass, or remembered that moss grew
on the North of trees, but I couldn't even see the trees. Bam.
"Ouch!" There's one.

It was now pouring, thundering, like all hell had broken loose. I was almost crying,
not that you would be able to tell with all the raindrops splattering on my face.
Suddenly, I heard the sound of feet. 
"Thank god. Thank god." I sobbed, walking towards the sound. I could now faintly see
the figure. It was tall, and quite big. None of the kids were that big, and the
teacher and hike guide were quite short. In fact the figure didn't look human at
all, with it's round ears, giant paws, and little bear tail. BEAR TAIL? I had no
idea what to do, so I did what anyone in the situation would have done. I screamed
as loud as I could, and took off in the other direction. Bam.
Oh hey, another tree... I thought as I fell towards the ground. Hard.


4.) Sweetcherry123
WhenJennifer came walking out of her homeroom at Brenton High, she was startled by
the shouts of "Ugly girl" and " One-eyed Weirdo" (They meant she was as ugly as a
one-eyed monster!) I didn't think she was ugly at all! She had blond hair, dark blue
eyes, and a big red mouth! I glanced at the person making the biggest shouts of all,
Ricky Montorrio. Ricky was the biggest, baddest, boy in all of Brenton High. He was
as tall as Gorilla standing on his hind legs. He was as strong too. Rumor has it that
Ricky can beat up 10 12th graders in just 60 seconds. (He's only in the 10th grade!)
I rolled my eyes and glanced back at Jennifer. She was crying now. Looking for a way
to get out of this mess. I decided to help her. 

I squirmed through the huge crowd that  formed in the halls. When I came to Jennifer,
she glanced at me and gave me a big hug. I smiled and said, "Jennifer, listen to me,
I want you to-" I was cut off by the sounds of shrieks in the hall of the south
corridor. Everyone suddenly hushed and started shuffling to the south corridor.
Jennifer looked at me and said, "What were you saying?" I couldn't hear her. I was
awestruck at the creature everyone was running from. "Run, it's a lountain mion, I
mean mountain loin!" exclaimed
Confused Cathy. Cathy's real name was Cathy Willers. But we call her Confused Cathy,
you can tell why we call her Confused Cathy!!! I felt like my feet was stabled to the
ground. Seems like Jennifer's was too!

The creature came closer. He glared at me and then shook his head. But, when he
glanced at Jennifer, he immediately charged at  her. " Jennifer, NO!!!!." The animal
was about ready to eat her. Before that happened, I took a picture of Jennifer's
face. She was sobbing. The lion ate her, and nobody ever saw her again. (At least
Ricky felt guilty! He's the one that let the lion loose!!!)


5.) Author_2B
Ms. Draco Malfoy

The Slytherin dorm was unneccessarily awakened by the horrific screaming of Blaise
Zambini. "AAAAARRRRRGGGGGHHHH!!!!!! THERES A GIRL IN HERE!!!!"was all Draco
could hear under the covers of his bed. He fustratedly tore the sheets off himself
and yelled, "WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT!!! THIS IS THE BOYS' DORM!!!!" The boys'
heads all turned towards Draco, and suddenly they froze, dumbstruck. "What? Why are
you lot looking at??" Then they all screamed. "Wha-?" he started to say, but he was
cut off from looking himself in the mirror on his bedside
table."AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!"
       Just then, Snape burst through the door. "WHAT IN THE NAME OF MERLIN IS GOING
ON IN HERE?!?!?!" he bellowed. He looked in the direction of the frightened boys to
Draco, and jumped. "Oh my..." he said. "Look at this!" Draco said, standing up,
"I'm... I'm a girl!!!" He touched his now long, sleek, blond hair and jumped, then
looked down his shirt. "Oh GOD!!! I AM a girl!!!!" He looked from one face to
another. "Uhh... um..." Snape said, "Come with me Draco." his voice sounded stuttery
and uncontroably high. It seemed as if he was still clearing out what just happened.
      He led him outside the door, charming it so the boys inside won't be able to
evesdrop. "Err.. Draco, you do know that you're not... not Draco, right?" Snape said,
trying to sound comforting "What's that supposed to mean?!?" Draco yelled, "Do you
not see that I'm a GIRL?!?!" "Shhh!!! Lower your voice!! You don't want other people
to know about this!" "What about the people inside, who discovered this?!?" "I will
use a simple Memory Charm. I got it covered. But for now, you will have to start a
new life at Hogwarts. I will escort you down to Dumbeldore for your Sorting. Your new
name will be... Dracie Malfoy." "Dracie?!?! Are you kidding me? What about my rep? My
friends?? My accomplishments? And can't I even have a better name?!?!" "Become a new
student, get a new group of friends. Girl friends. And I do not mean the ones
you bring into the dormitory." he said with a smirk, "Is that clear?" "But-" "I said
IS THAT CLEAR?" "Yes, sir." "Good. Now go down to Dumbledore immediatly. I will catch up to you once I... finish with
the boys. Now
go."
      Draco couldn't believe his luck. A new life? New friends? And does that mean he
should have to get a boyfriend??? It was surely a disaster in the making.


6.) Eviluar
How long have i been running? all i know is that the mild burning in my lungs has
long become searing pain, and every breath was a painful knife. I looked around. i
was sprinting along a deserted high way. The dull glow of  the moon was the only
source of light. it was silent. There was NOTHING. Not the long howl of a wolf, not
the screech of a low-on-gas car. i was alone. Alone was never an un fillmiliar word
to me. i am on the american, canadian and the chinese wanted list. The only crime i
ever commited was being born. 


I AM XIANNA. DAUGHTER OF H.I.M.M. Yes his name is H.I.M.M. He had a real one, but
that grew old with misuse. No one knows it. Not one of his 58 wives, or one of his
132 children. i am the only surviving girl, dear old POPS never liked the girls. it
was only by luck that i survived, or didnt  die from a misteroius gut retching
desiese. We lived in a horrible mansion, deep underground. UNDER A NUCUALR POWER
PLANT!!!! We slowly mutated inside. Some faster that others. My brother got a tail
and another's blood turned into cloriphyll. I had to run. i had no choice..........


7.) Momokoko
"today on deal or no deal! we will bring you!!!" and the tv turned off." i love deal
or no deal. its a great show." mike said as he got off the couch. "OH NO!!! i forgot
about halloween!"
he put on his devil horns and took his flag and board that said "deal or no deal"
outside.
"sorry guys, im late" said mike.
"yeah you sure are" said christina.
"im gonna say deal or no deal to every house!"
"thats stupid" said susie.
we walked to many houses and then boom! we got sent to a vortex that was purple and
twirly. i saw a yellow door and i went in it. the door disapeared. christina saw a
blue door and went in it. it disapeared. susie saw another vortex. but it wasn't
really a vortex, it was a black hole!! she got sucked in it and landed in a a white
place with squares on it and there were still people. well they were people from
inuyasha. i landed in a place with squares on it aswell, but a red background. i
looked down and i saw susie. i was actually looking up though! i was falling and
falling and then i landed beside susie. "what the hell is happening!" i said.
christina just saw us and had a big bag of chocolate and candy!" where did u get
that!" said susie. "i went trick or treating here! they have halloween like us but
instead the candy is better!"said christina.we went trick or treating and i held up
my deal or no deal sign and they gave me more candy! but it tasted crappy. but
christina and susie loved it and they traded with me! I live happily ever
after!


8.) xCowxKissesx
A single cloud loomed in the sky, coming dangerously close to covering up my star. I
glanced down at Jat's limp body, brushing my stiff fingers over his cold skin. I lay
my hand over his heart, still hoping.
Jat was dead.
I felt a light weight on my shoulder. I looked up to see the blazing red hair, like
fire, and piercing silver eyes of Deyomic, his eyes frozen, emotionless. He refused
to cry.
"Deyomic, I..." I hesitated to finish my sentence. Deyomic nodded. He scratched the
triangular black mark on his left cheek, hesitantly taking a step towards the river.
he continued walking, leaving The body of his dear friend Jat and I behind him.
My eyes followed his slow pace. He stopped. He looked back at me, his face remaining
emotionless. A single tear made his way down his cheek.
"My star has fallen." He said, turning his back on me. The wind blew through his
Firey hair, and Deyomic was gone.

8.) Cry_For_Me
Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells, Jingle Bell... Dope?

 Nicola slumped on her soft, faux suede chair, and sighed. "Why is the world so
harsh?" she thought to herself. It was Christmas Eve's Night, and Nicola was all
alone; apparently no-one wanted to spend their Christmas with her. "At the least, it
could snow... I've never seen a white Christmas" she muttered to herself. She gazed
out of her bedroom window, out onto the cold, bare streets below. She let out a
sigh, and heaved herself out of her chair, and over to her bed. She climbed in, and
fell asleep into dreams of happy people surrounding her, treating her like an
equal.
 Nicola woke up abruptly, and looked at the foot of her bed. "Presents!" she gasped.
She looked at all of the labels, and she saw what she had wished to see on all
Christmas cards and Christmas presents' labels alike. "I have friends, and they sent
me presents!" she cried. Nicola pulled on her favourite outfit - her black kimono -
and walked to the window. Her eyes widened in surprise; she ran to the back door and
ran outside into her extremely large garden. "It's.... SNOWING!!!" she exclaimed.
 She started dancing around in the garden, but suddenly she stopped; and put up 2
great big thumbs up and sang as loud as she could, "Walkin' in a Winter
Wonderland!"


9.) MewMewKitten
Once, there was a girl named Angel.
She owned a flower shop. She loves to pick out the best Christmas trees so she goes
to the Christmas Tree store on December 1st. "I'm going to close the store for the
rest of the day." Angel told her younger sister, Lenore. "Alright, when you come
back can we decorate the tree?" Lenore asked her older sister. "Duh, dummy." she
told her, "Why wouldn't we?" Then, Angel got into her car and drove off. Lenore went
to the store and left it open for one more hour. By then, about thirty people came in
and brought flowers. When an hour passed by Lenore closed it. Then she walked across
the street to her house. Meanwhile, her sister Angel was stuck in traffic. She
thought that her tradition was everyones' now. She was angry. She called Lenore and
told her she would be late. Lenore just moaned and sighed into the phone. About two
hours later Angel got to the store. There was only a few trees left. She didn't like
any of them. She decided to go to the next Christmas store. She found out that it
would take an hour longer to get there. She called Lenore again and Lenore was
yelling and screaming about how other people should stop copying them. Angel arrived
at the next store to find out that there was no trees left. She didn't call Lenore,
she thought if she did then Lenore would start screaming at her. She went back to
the other store and the trees from last time were taken. She went to three different
cities and found one tree that was perfect. About 11pm she arrived at her house.
Lenore looked very angry until she saw how pretty the tree was. She took out the
decorations and the perfect angel for the top. This was the year Lenore got to put
it on top.  Then Lenore decided that Angel went through a lot of work to get the
tree so she let her put it on top. They were finished at midnight. They were very
happy with their tree.


10.) Used_Friendly_Girl
The Candy Monster.
The sparkling dew on the grass change into sweet smelling syrup. Fay gazed upon the
grass, feeling very curios she ran towards the gate and accidentally ran straight to
a human shaped syrup, 10 feet high, she licked her fingers, the something roared loud
that thunder it self won’t come out. Fay ran, ran fast without a breath she jumped
over the bush and hid quietly behind the next larger bush.

 
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bluejay29 says: 20 November 2007  
lolz im STILL the only one thats entered XD
cerahureka says: 21 November 2007  
hello!!! HI WHAT ABOUT ME???
lil_tomboy_gurl says: 21 November 2007  
i vote for cerahureka!!!
BriBriRox_xox says: 21 November 2007  

?? ^^
JimPi says: 21 November 2007  
@Cera: You're there!

@Tomboy: It's not a voting thing...
It's just an extra page I had >>
JimPi says: 21 November 2007  
@BriBri: Where's the story?
bluejay29 says: 21 November 2007  
lolz now there tis more pplz!!
JimPi says: 21 November 2007  
Yup :D
Sweetcherry123 says: 21 November 2007  
I'm gonna enter! I'm just gonna get ready.Once I am ready, I will mail you a
letter.



P.S how do you copy a Oekaki??/ Message me the answer plz!
JimPi says: 21 November 2007  
Okay :D
ToxicDuck says: 21 November 2007  
I feel so happy to be a contestant. 
And special. xD 
 -Laughs- I think I forgot teh neck on my drawing. O_o
cerahureka says: 21 November 2007  
HEHE!!!! umm.... why dose it say "VOTING" then, lil_tomboy_gurl voted for
MMMMEEEEEEEEEE!!!
o_parts_hunter666 says: 22 November 2007  
i vote for the person above me!!!!!
eviluar says: 22 November 2007  
Hey!! i wrote one 2!!!!!
xcowxkissesx says: 22 November 2007  
nyah~ i entered :D im too lazy to go get it, so its the "my star has fallen" one.
cerahureka says: 23 November 2007  
i vote 4 the 1 that u didnt put on!!!! hte deal or no deal
ToxicDuck says: 24 November 2007  
Cerahureka- Jim-chan's already said that this isn't a voting page. It's just a page
where she puts up the contestant's entries.
JimPi says: 25 November 2007  
@Toxic: LOL
I would too :3
And thanks.

@Cera: Because. It's an extra page I had from other contests.
I explained that already.

@Evil: -_-;;
I know.
I've been gone for a while so I'm just now gettin' on.
So don't get your tidywidies in  a knot D:<

@Claire: Aaaaahh...
You lazy bum!!
xD
Cry_for_me says: 22 December 2007  
Booooom ^-^

I like my story/picture :D
jadenyuki says: 22 December 2007  
can i do it! tho im gonna have to draw and scan....im no gewd at oekakis
JimPi says: 22 December 2007  
Okay :D
That's what I did for the example :3
TacoeyGoodness says: 24 December 2007  
MewMewKitten has a good one 
JimPi says : 25 December 2007  
LOL
I bet you think that >:D
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